Ride -2005
During the period that this work was written, I was quite smitten by a tall, tough, fun and feisty farmgirl from Ohio who had brains, brawn and a talent for languages. She was also one of those people that work their way into your life, your heart and your head and never do quite leave – even if they’re not immediately present in the day to day drudgery of existence any longer. I normally refer to her in code in my posts – either as “TLG” ( an unfortunately chosen acronym for “The Last Girlfriend” among my friends – HAH! ) – or as Jazmin, which harks back to an old screenname of hers. In any case, this poem is full of hidden meanings and suggestions that only she and I would probably understand on their face – to the reader, it may appear to be nothing more than a work referring to me riding pillion while she drives her bike down the country roads… yet there is something running underneath which is a theme ( a dollar, a drink or a candy to the first reader who can correctly identify the secondary theme! ) that was an important current to the relationship.
(I should note that you’re not seeing things – unless you’ve access to better intoxicants that I do! The spacing and irregular pacing is indeed intentional – and really can’t properly be replicated on a webpage alone – it really does look much better in print in monospace Courier type – but that can’t be helped here, so sorry for the inconvenience – I tried as best I could to make the work fit the space).
Ride
–
Strap me
to the back
of
that
thing
–
and
take me
for a
——- ride
–
Weave me
in
——– and
out
——– at speed.
–
Arms wrapped round
in a tight embrace
–
Wind
——- in
———– my
——— face
–
The
——– lash
of
——– your
hair
——– ‘gainst
my
——- skin.
–
Pressed up tight against you
–
I’ll
take
every ————- bump
in
———- the
—————– road
–
and
laugh
with
joy.
–
Take me
down
———- those
——— curves
I’ve
————– felt
–
and drive me
down new roads
–
The
ruts
the ———- mud
–
It’s ——– part
of
——– the ride
–
Let’s take it
in stride
and smile
again
–
so when
the road
smooooooths out
and
we glide
like
———– ice
on
——— glass
–
and
pass each
exit flying
–
with laughter
and
a smile
–
no
stopping
——– for awhile;
–
we’ve
got
plenty
of
fuel
–
and
–
I trust
——– you
enough
to know
———- you’ll pull
us off
——– to safety
–
if ever you sense
———— hazards
in
——- our
————- path.
— circa 2005 —
LOL… how graphic.
There’s no bike here, just two people fuelled with great intimacy and passion, and I’m scared to even assume it’s in the bedroom. She must have been one bold and sexy lady 😛
bomi said this on October 10, 2008 at 8:55 pm
Ah… someone gets the prize – no surprise that it’s Bomi who read between the lines and found motion within emotion… but I’ve come to expect that of her 🙂
I’d promise to send one of my award-winning cheesecakes to you, but even I doubt that dry ice and Styrofoam will keep it fresh between WNY and SA! But if you ever visit Niagara Falls some day, I promise you a tour and dessert.
Actually, she did have her own bike – an early 2000’s series Victory – a perfect fit for her. But I never had the chance to take that fine ride with her as described above – our relationship was drawing to a dysfunctional end at the time I wrote this work. I’ve recently learned that she’s happily married now and a new mom – and I wish her all the best from the depths of my heart… but while we were together, there was a certain electricity and drive that is obvious in the poem.
Risk has its own rewards… and time serves to smooth and temper memory – so I prefer to remember the best that we enjoyed and not think as much on the loss. But you are correct, she was and is one that I’ll never forget – and who has touched and changed me in ways that have made me who I am today.
.g.
geenoh said this on October 12, 2008 at 7:48 pm
Yay! I get the prize. I could’ve analysed it line by line, but I feared that I’d have to title it “How Geno Likes Things In The Bedroom” and unfortunately that would’ve been waaaay over my head 🙂
If ever I do find myself on that side of the globe, I’ll be sure to take you up on your offer, but I must warn you, if your cheesecake is anything close to “award-winning” according to my books, I might never return to SA.
bomi said this on October 18, 2008 at 5:43 pm