Ride -2005

During the period that this work was written, I was quite smitten by a tall, tough, fun and feisty farmgirl from Ohio who had brains, brawn and a talent for languages.  She was also one of those people that work their way into your life, your heart and your head and never do quite leave – even if they’re not immediately present in the day to day drudgery of existence any longer.  I normally refer to her in code in my posts – either as “TLG” ( an unfortunately chosen acronym for “The Last Girlfriend” among my friends – HAH! ) – or as Jazmin, which harks back to an old screenname of hers.  In any case, this poem is full of hidden meanings and suggestions that only she and I would probably understand on their face – to the reader, it may appear to be nothing more than a work referring to me riding pillion while she drives her bike down the country roads… yet there is something running underneath which is a theme ( a dollar, a drink or a candy to the first reader who can correctly identify the secondary theme! ) that was an important current to the relationship.

(I should note that you’re not seeing things – unless you’ve access to better intoxicants that I do!  The spacing and irregular pacing is indeed intentional – and really can’t properly be replicated on a webpage alone – it really does look much better in print in monospace Courier type – but that can’t be helped here, so sorry for the inconvenience – I tried as best I could to make the work fit the space).


Ride

Strap me

to the back

of

that

thing

and

take me

for a

——- ride

Weave me

in

——– and

out

——– at speed.

Arms wrapped round

in a tight embrace

Wind

——- in

———– my

——— face

The

——– lash

of

——– your

hair

——– ‘gainst

my

——- skin.

Pressed up tight against you

I’ll

take

every ————- bump

in

———- the

—————– road

and

laugh

with

joy.

Take me

down

———- those

——— curves

I’ve

————– felt

and drive me

down new roads

The

ruts

the ———- mud

It’s ——– part

of

——– the ride

Let’s take it

in stride

and smile

again

so when

the road

smooooooths out

and

we glide

like

———– ice

on

——— glass

and

pass each

exit flying

with laughter

and

a smile

no

stopping

——– for awhile;

we’ve

got

plenty

of

fuel

and

I trust

——– you

enough

to know

———- you’ll pull

us off

——– to safety

if ever you sense

———— hazards

in

——- our

————- path.

— circa 2005 —


3 Responses to “Ride -2005”

  1. LOL… how graphic.
    There’s no bike here, just two people fuelled with great intimacy and passion, and I’m scared to even assume it’s in the bedroom. She must have been one bold and sexy lady 😛

  2. Ah… someone gets the prize – no surprise that it’s Bomi who read between the lines and found motion within emotion… but I’ve come to expect that of her 🙂

    I’d promise to send one of my award-winning cheesecakes to you, but even I doubt that dry ice and Styrofoam will keep it fresh between WNY and SA! But if you ever visit Niagara Falls some day, I promise you a tour and dessert.

    Actually, she did have her own bike – an early 2000’s series Victory – a perfect fit for her. But I never had the chance to take that fine ride with her as described above – our relationship was drawing to a dysfunctional end at the time I wrote this work. I’ve recently learned that she’s happily married now and a new mom – and I wish her all the best from the depths of my heart… but while we were together, there was a certain electricity and drive that is obvious in the poem.

    Risk has its own rewards… and time serves to smooth and temper memory – so I prefer to remember the best that we enjoyed and not think as much on the loss. But you are correct, she was and is one that I’ll never forget – and who has touched and changed me in ways that have made me who I am today.

    .g.

  3. Yay! I get the prize. I could’ve analysed it line by line, but I feared that I’d have to title it “How Geno Likes Things In The Bedroom” and unfortunately that would’ve been waaaay over my head 🙂

    If ever I do find myself on that side of the globe, I’ll be sure to take you up on your offer, but I must warn you, if your cheesecake is anything close to “award-winning” according to my books, I might never return to SA.

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